Walking The Line

"So solitary, On the bathroom floor,
Wiping the tears my reflection saw,
Time's a wasting before my eyes,
Drawing the line of my own demise."

Wonderful opening stanza, excellent flow and word choice! This poem told was very sad, but you wrote this very well. I enjoyed reading this, keep writing, always and forever...

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Nice ;) .

A very powerful poem...
the word choice is great...

"So solitary, On the bathroom floor,
Wiping the tears my reflection saw,
Time's a wasting before my eyes,
Drawing the line of my own demise."

^^ loved the first stanza... so much emotions burst out from these lines..
the way you have described the turmoil within you is awesome..

I loved the last line
"I just keep on walking the line."

it increases impact made by your poem...

Excellent poem..

Wow...
I love this. I wish it was longer because I truly liked it from the first to the last line but it is very effective like this too because you managed to say so much within just two stanzas. I like your choice of words a lot. The imagery that you portrayed in each stanza is breathtaking, very intense. You expressed emotions excellently, too, I could feel everything that you described.
Overall, greatly written sad poem.
5/5 from me