Starts wit a little girl ends wit a fallen angel...thanks 2 him

by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion   May 2, 2008


It starts with a young girl
and an innocent heart
it used to be whole
at the very start

she fell for a boy
oh she thought love was grand
but little did she seem to know
love would not happen how she planned

she found that he was sweet
and for her he seemed to care
but when he got drunk
his actions were not fair

she was just his punching bag
his sense of relief
but he stole her heart
he was nothing but a thief

when he stopped drinking
he still stayed the same
fr some pathetic reason
he thought her heart was a game

she was to scared to move
all night she would cry
rather than live her life
her only wish; to die

her next stage was depression
she just couldn't cope
no body understood it
but this little girl lost hope

then she became a cutter
she lost all control
but the realize of pain only delayed the thought
of how, her heart he stole

her life seemed a mess
as the depression got worse
she fell into bad eating habits
this is her next curse

weeks go by with out food
still no one seems to see
this did help her request
to destroy who she used to be

so now her heart is guarded
hiding the remaining mess
of where the blade hit her skin
and left her feeling worthless

so she's just this little girl
with simply just a heart
shes now another fallen angel
thats all broken apart.....

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  • 15 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Good i lilke that your telling a complete story even though your ryhme scheme faltered a little it still flowed pretty good but i dont use rhyme schemes so i have no room to talk and it was a good work over all

  • 15 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Wow! such an emotional story. very well written.... keep up the good work :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Fade_t0_bLaCk

    I have to say this was an awesome poem, really. Looking forward to reading more...

  • Hey babe this is a really good poem! deserves so much more comments!

    your flow was flawless thought i did lose it a little in the 8th stanza! love it hunny!

    "weeks go by with out food
    still no one seems to see
    this did help her request
    to destroy who she used to"
    ^^
    Great description! and so ture!

    "so she's just this little girl
    with simply just a heart
    shes now another fallen angel
    thats all broken apart..... "
    ^^ great ending to a great poem well done =)

    ~ This Mask I Hold Is Not Held Tight ~

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Wow that was full of emotion...It bought tears to my eyes I kno a giel who went thru the same thing she ended up takein her life...
    well done great writting!!
    xoxo