Ice Queen

This is amazing...truely captivating..loved it !

Diamond-patterned tongue illustrates wildfire
crawling across recombined heartbeats
doused with flourish hissing of emerald sun
which embedded witchcrafts into frigid aura.

--i feel that it is missing some punctuation but your description is very intricate. you used a lot of descriptions that most people would never be able to come up with.

Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.

--i love that instead of just saying blue, you used cerulean. thats a much more detailed description of the eyes than most would put.

Words surrender to the effigy of winged winter,
embodying malediction within nightingale's heart
as phlegmatic addictions allure silhouettes
outlined with ink of gunpowder and blood.

--i like the very last line. for some reason it just pulls me. still missing punctuation it feels butthe detailed descriptions make up for it.

Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons.

--said it all the first time

Icicles, like needles, ornament cyan halo,
embracing frail petals of inner aurora;
snowy watercolors reflect sensations, as
stripped temptations mold enticing gaze.

--this is an amazing poem though i cant seem to figure out what it is supposed to be about. other than missing punctuation it is extraordinary

This is an amazingly beautiful poem. The vocabulary really makes it a wonderful read. Awesome job. And thank you so much for the comment, I really appreciate it.

Ahmm.. honestly i can't really understand the exact meaning of it but base on my own comprehension it talks about a woman who only knows how to speak harsh feelings... by the way, i admire the words and the imagination the you have created itwas so unique

Ok, first thing that stood out to me in this poem was

'Cerulean eyes absorb narrative horizons', this metaphor was amazing also you used repetition to convey to the reader that this was a dominant and important part to you poem.

Most of the sentences, were declarative meaning that you used descriptions vety well. Some were imperatives showing you used a lot of verb usage also which is crucial in poetry to help describe to the reader atmophere and meaning.

Even using a simile in this poem meant you really used all kinds of format which is really good.

Really enjoyed this poem. Good job

Alex xxx