A Whole New World (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   May 18, 2008


Whispers of the hushed wind,
As we lay among the grass.
Birds chirp flying over our heads,
Heartbeat unnaturally fast.

Each breath that I take filters a fresh new air,
Whenever your stunning voice speaks.
A whole new world does shine upon us,
With each memory new to me.

Take a mixture of commitment and care.
A few teaspoons of passion; three of four,
Stir with your knowledge and faith,
And for my broken heart you hold the cure.

I close my eyes at the dead of night,
Not knowing how you will surprise me tomorrow.
A whole new world inside my dreams
No more evil twisted sorrow.

Holding hands along the beach,
Sea humming holding many stories.
Searing sun sets ready for night,
Anticipating tomorrow's glory.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautifully written and electrifying piece. :) I loved every word you used. You did an amazing job. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    This is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL piece of poetry! people on this site should write love poems more like this.

    Take a mixture of commitment and care.
    A few teaspoons of passion; three of four,
    Stir with your knowledge and faith,
    And for my broken heart you hold the cure.
    ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
    i liked this stanza the best. it's absolutely magnificent.

    i found this piece immensely pleasant to read. a change from the dark poems that i usually would.
    nice rhyme and flow in here, also

    5/5

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~