The Angel's Lullaby (contest)

by Choose xX Alex Xx Life   Nov 4, 2007


Soft whispers; The wind of death.
Approaches the area more than often,
An inevitable fate lies in store for most
Too many lives it is costing.

Poverty; An unnecessary disease
The angels lullaby is never a step too far,
Whispers of death nearer than ever.
Children; losing mind. In state of who they are.

On his little broken knees at night,
A frail child prays a plea.
please angel, take my unworthwhile life',
'Set my torn bruised heart free'.

'Dream a Dream of love
May heaven now release your soul.
Another world is now upon you',
The angel's lullaby sung.

Walking three miles each day,
Her fractured little toes stumble slowly,
Reaching the water, dirty, contaminated.
Mysterious faces glaring as she creeps boldly.

A camp; The red cross patrol.
Fighting the battle, to save innocent lives,
Insides bleeding tears however,
For their release; The angel's lullaby.

'Dream a Dream of love
May heaven now release your soul.
Another world is now upon you',
The angel's lullaby sung...

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  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Wow. that was really good. The only thing i can say was to make the rhyming a little bit less forced..but thats me of course. I love this poem it is awesome. Be sure to check out mine!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Herald

    Not just best poem today, best poem ever. wow, thats all i can say wow.... it was just like, mind blowing. i am....so sad.............im literaly writing this with tears streaming down my face...

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Heart-felt. I like it. Sad, but real. Great choice of words. mediocre flow, could use a little more rhyme (but that's just my preference)