In your arms......

by amber   May 27, 2008


In the darkness I reach for you.....
In the night I feel.....
In the turmoil of the sheets I turn.....
In your arms...I heal....

In the darkness I touch you....
In the night I am whole....
In the turmoil of our passion
In your arms...I unfold....

In the darkness I sweat love...
In the night I hold your skin...
In the turmoil of the love...
In your arms...I let you in....

In the darkness I will hold you....
In the night you will be mine....
In the turmoil of my heart....
In your arms...I'm entwined....

In the darkness I will know you....
In the night I will see....
In the turmoil of my vision...
In your arms....will be me....

By:Amber
thank you to everyone who reads this. this is the first. this came from somewhere deep inside me. some place thats opened up and became very vulnerable. It's a scary but wonderful feeling to experience for i'm experiencing true love (Thank God) Please tell me what you think. I done my best to structure it and put every ounce of what i feel into this. For all who know me i always comment back so if you leave a comment i will return it!
THANK YOU ALL VERY MUCH!!!!
~*~Amber~*~

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lily

    I loved it, I love all your work,It was a really pretty poems, easy to read and to sink in.
    Your pdl x

  • 15 years ago

    by becca

    Again amber this absolutely beautiful! a really soft and passionat e poem i really loved it =D
    xXx

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Amber, this is excellently structured. Some may not like the repetiveness of the 'In the' or the 'turmoil's'..I on the other hand love them. They really drum this intense love home for me, making me believe every ounce of emotion you poured into this!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Hilary Day

    I truely feel for you poem.. I love it. Keep writing.

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