My Endless Hell

by amber   Dec 19, 2008

They are echoes around me
From the past behind
A perfect heart corrupted
By unmerciful time

Whispers from the decietful
And tears from the humble
These worlds, two different worlds
Yet both lives crumble

The decietful loose everything
And have nothing to spare
Like a wolf to it's prey
It hasn't a care

To the full moon above
The humble shall cry
They will loose everything
And the decietful will die

My heart is humble
To the things I choose
But like the decietful,
I too shall loose

I shall loose all but one thing
Like the leaves of a tree
I will keep my hindsight
And constantly see

I will see my pain,
And feel all others
I will have no strenght
And no trust in lovers

I will have but one thing
And one thing alone
The one thing to which
Is always my home

Past memories will haunt me
And there I will dwell
Like the repeat of eternity
My endless Hell.

By: Amber

go easy on this one,'s the first in a while. please tell me what you think...i would greatly appreciate it and i will return the favor :)


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Beautiful language,sharp emotional descriptions. clearly written by a genius with a heart :) I kinda like it a lot

  • 13 years ago

    by Richard S

    You were kind to me with your comments in the past. you have nothing to worry about. i thought it was wonderful and wished i could have written like that when i was your age. check spelling and hurry back with some new poems.

  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, dont know why you were worrying about people going easy, this poem is really great. honstly. and your language is amazing through out and kept up a good steady pace. keep it up. well done xx