A letter to some1

by waiting 4 some1   Jun 6, 2008


I sat there where last time we met
A year has passed but I can't forget
I was sitting there on the same place
I was having an empty space
Where did you go and left me on my own?
Or was your friendship only a loan?
I thought our friendship forever will last
But once you left you have put me in the past
Was my friendship a sin you needed to atone?
So that's why without a word you left me alone?...

I sat there where last time we met
Two years have passed but I can't forget
I was remembering your charming face
I was remembering each word and phrase
You told me we will meet the day after tomorrow
So I kept counting the seconds and swings of the arrow
But you never called and we never met again
It was the first time you have tasted me pain
From that day I was called waiting 4 some1
So I am waiting for you, I am waiting 4 some1...

6/6/2006 last time we have met.
You can see in the first stanza it's written "a year..." while the second stanza "two years..."
Because this poem was written a year ago then rewritten this year.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is so touching, waiting on bench for some1 at alone. Keep thinking about first meet. You touch me heart and win also
    I deeply like this pome.

    keep writing
    best wishes for you

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww Adel,

    It can be so hard to have to live without a person you love so much. Maybe even harder than if that person had died and left you alone, because then you would have no choice but to accept it.
    Be brave, my friend..you have a good heart. I am sure our Lord will send someone on your path that will make you forget about those who left you behind:)

    Much love, Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Great as ever!!!
    U know ur words and they really touchs the heart of the reader.
    5/5

    God bless u ^_^

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, this poem is really touching and while i was reading it i just remebered all my best friends that i have spent with them my most precious moments in my entire life. and now i really have a desire to cry. it was so emotional.

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I think this is very sad and beautiful poem. You really so deep emotions.

    The flow was goos in the poem. It was a pleasure to read. I keep thinking who is the person you are talking about.. I can see you really cared this person. I think you still do... Even two years has passed...you still remembering the time you two met last time.

    I am sorry you two never met again.

    This is really a good poem. Nice writing.

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