Lust(Senryu)

by Ingrid   Jun 13, 2008


A girl that settles
for lust instead of love will
lose more than her pride

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  • 15 years ago

    by Invited

    That is very true, Ingrid, i hope many people see at this way. Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    ^A girl that settles
    for lust instead of love will
    lose more than her pride ^

    Insightful message but again, the second line reads like an incomplete sentence where you force the syllable count putting will at the end of the line.....