And Then You Die

I have been reading some of your poems this morning and this one is very touching. I read all the comments and there really is not anything else I could add other than, an excellent write, very powerful poem. Well done. 5/5

If i could describe this poem with one word it would be perfect great poem 10/10 good job

'Empty eyes staring back at me
With stories to raise the dead
Thoughts waiting to be set free
Deep inside this hollow head'
What a fantastic stanza this is. Lines are so well written. It's a great poem indeed. Lovely!

This is a very beautiful poem.
so true and pure.
your a wonderful writer, never quit.
keep up the nice owrk.

^Living in walls behind skies end
Exhaling clouds as you burn below
Surrounded by broken mirrors
Reflecting my life's echoes^

I love this haunting stanza. The word choice and flow are excellent!

^Will my shadow hold these tears
With elegance as I cry
Your picture ever return my kiss
Just before hope's dream dies ^

Beautifully worded is this my favorite stanza. What a way to end it. Great job on this piece!