Dead On The Inside, Lost On The Outside!

by Jack Nightengale   Jun 27, 2008


If only she knew,
If only she was to just listen,
If she did then I wouldn't be feeling Blue!
If she did then Our love would glisten!

I geuss I was foolish,
I geuss I was wrong,
How could I be so selfish!
Why did I wait so long?

I thought she would be my bride,
I was wrong so now I'm Dead On The Inside!
I thought she would forever be by my side,
I was wrong again and now I'm Lost On The Outside!

***Kris(last poem for a while)***

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  • 15 years ago

    by iamYOURS

    Screw her..lol im kidding..jussst kidding..nice poem..i guess im going to read all of your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow it was so great!I loved it great great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by S R P

    I enjoyed this, though one suggestion:

    "geuss" should be changed to "guess" - it's a small issue, but proper spelling REALLY helps with the flow and structure of a poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sora

    A lovely write.
    very emotional, you got your message across very well.
    great work keep it up!

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