Distance

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 28, 2008


Distance
Neglect
Out of respect

Silence
Ache
To prevent heart break

Paranoia
Worried
Was this too hurried

Unexpected
Surprise
How I came to realize

Time
Wait
This came too late

Love
Pain
Hard to refrain

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  • 15 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Oooh neat structure.
    This is very well-written.
    It was short, sweet, and PERFECT.
    Keep it up! 5/5

    Love,
    Tina

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Holy crap. This was extremely good. I love the rhyming, it flowed along freaking amazingly. Wowwwieee. I love how you are sharing what is going through your head. Nice work!! 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Wow. so much emotion in here. great job jen.5/5
    **harlea