Everything Happens For A Reason.

Enjoyed the entire write except for the fourth stanza, it seemed to lose the metre of the work.
I would have followed the third stanza(negative acts) with a stanza of positive ones such as smlie, hug, kiss and ended it with two lines
"Very thing happens.
FOR A REASON" .
As always an opinion.

Their comments were too much...^^
it's to long..hehe...
for me ur poem is simply nice and well written..
^^
i also believe that everything happens for a reason..bcause when many things fall down to your shoulder.. u'll be forced to believe in that saying just to feel good..

Dude..
seriously i am speechless
i was just goin thru life
trying to ignore everythin that
comes up to me
but i was readin poem
specailly the learn of sayin
"
Every heart that gets shattered -
shatters for a reason.
Every tear that is shed -
sheds for a reason.
Every lie that is told -
is told for a reason"

just readin those lines gives me the reasons why i am goin wrong in my life
just keep it up the good job
and i would love to see more poems
like these once god bless
u deserve 1000/1000

much luv
-Moha...

I think everyone who commented b4 got it perfectly

"Everything happens for a reason."
Oh, how the quote expatiates in my mind.
It is what I live by each day -
my life motto; what I deem.

^^The first stanza started of amazing. It captured my attention right away. Tis what everyone should live by these days.

'It is the truth as to why things transpire -
the way that they do.
It elucidates life in it's entirety-
whether it be for the better or the worse.

^^The emotion i felt in this stanza blew me away. It amazes me that somebody so young understands that everything happens for better or worse, but always ends up in a lesson.

'Every heart that gets shattered -
shatters for a reason.
Every tear that is shed -
sheds for a reason.
Every lie that is told -
is told for a reason.'

^^seriously true! i feel that everything happens for a reason, but life is our teacher. it gives the tests first the lessons afterward.

'Although life is full of plenty of hassles,
Don't frown when you stumble on them.
Look within yourself and you'll really see-
Everything truly does happen for a reason-
And rather than crying and being sad,
Find the happiness within, and smile.'

^^ the last stanza hits me in my gut. i understand this completly. For it is somethingi've recently taken to. I also agree you must find the happiness in even the most inevitable situations.

well written. I always enjoy readong your poetry.
5/5