Angel In Disguise

by SashaMirage   Jul 9, 2008


The angelic look upon your face is such a good disguise.
How do you do it, how do you hide your lies?
The secrets are kept hidden in such a safe place.
They're always in your heart, left with empty space.
You can take much more, you are so strong.
If I placed my head upon your heart,
I would hear the saddest song.
How do you do it; angel in disguise?
How do you do it, I want to hide my lies.
You are a soldier much stronger than steel.
Sometimes I wonder are you numb, can you feel?
So many people have broken your heart.
But you hide it so well, you never fall apart.
People say things so mean;
Another bullet to your soul.
but you hide it so well;
you've got it under control.
How do you do it, angel in disguise?
How do you go on hiding the lies?
Can anyone break the shield you have built over time?
Or will you convict the one who tries for his crime?
Your secrets are locked up so deep inside.
Is it because of your sorrow or because of pride?
Angel in disguise do your tears ever flow?
Are your eyes so clever,
never allowing them to show?
Oh, angel in disguise please teach me.
My heart is broken, I need you desperately.
As I try to lock my heart more
tears slide down my eyes
For the first time I've realized
I was talking to myself
The Angel In Disguise.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Thanks for that comment and I change the grammatical error.

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Very impressive. I wasn't expecting the last three lines. I had this picture in my mind while I was reading it of this girl saying this to a beautifully stoic boy. Then reading the ending, and finding out you were talking to yourself, I felt a little twitch of unwarrented disappointment. It went away though, because I realized I was being ridiculous. I liked these lines best:
    "Can anyone break the shield you have built over time? Or will you convict the one who tries for his crime?"
    All in all, wonderful poem. It tugged heartstrings. Very poetic; rhymes were fantastic. The only thing I found wrong with it was a grammatical error. In the fourth line down, the first word is 'there.' It should be "they're." Other than that, which is a minor thing, I loved it. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I dont normally put it this way, in all poetic terms that was a simply wonderful poem i was hooked and the way you ryhmed had me caught in every inch of the words. now for a reader im sorry to say i saw the ending coming not to say it was not great it was but alas i saw it coming. your a great author keep it up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    A fantastic, sad poem...it really hurts, perhaps because i also feel the same way..but all in all it's great..

    keep it up...

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    It is just another wonderful poem. the angel of disguise could be me. I can really call my self this name. I am really the pesron you are talking about.

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