Love's Curfew

Beautiful write hun. 5/5
Love the emotion.

First off, the title is nice. :)

In this piece I thought your word choice was better. Your rhyming was nice again, but what I found to be lacking was your flow. But adding or taking out a couple of small words you will find your poem to such much better.

If you're not sure if your flow is okay or not, try reading it out loud. You'll hear the flow better than if you just read it in your mind.

My honest critique: 4/5

It is very sad when it is too late, but this poem is a beautiful way to face it

"Sometimes the answer to love is a break
Leaving is the answer for what we brew
I will try not to miss you for only your sake
Now is the time to answer love's curfew "
That is a powerful strong end.
The rest of this i enjoyed. It was sad, but like there was some hope after all.
Wonderful!

Lexie

This was a really beautiful poem,
i loved reading every word.
the pain of a broken relationship was shown so clearly through it.
The power of love is so strong that sometimes we as humans cant actually control its outcome but we can try and do our best to make it
a good one.
I loved this poem, it was a wonderful write,
great job!!! keep it up