INVITING ELEMENTS

by Kevin   Jun 3, 2004


How I love the rain
the sleet and snow
for while they rage
we all know
camaraderie
against the bane
as if it’s World War 1 again

a kinship with out fellow kind
that shows itself
when the sun don’t shine

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Exellent poem. I like it alot.

  • 19 years ago

    by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg

    You know what? I totally agree. People do tend to do that. And nice sense of imagry in that piece. It was a bit short, but then again it didn't have to be long. I hope you write more. Keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin

    This ditty is about how under extreme weather we are humans all seem to be closer...y'know, we actually look at each other in the street with a little bit of understanding...yeah...some feedback would be good...

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