The Missing

by Kevin   Jun 3, 2004


All thats ever moved me
is everything you've read about
in books by crooks
and ex war heroes

you can taste it
with your popcorn
as the movies gently hint at
the magic and the silence
just everything and all that

read between
the lines and scenes
and without a doubt
i'm sure you'll see
there
as simple as a smile
and ready to be free
nestled in a den of thought

all thats ever moved me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Knight_of_Blackrose

    I thought that was some great work.... Keep it up... going back to read some more of them
    Aaron

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    good one... none wrong wif it ... hope u can visit mine...

  • 19 years ago

    by Tamila Bob

    it's ok-doe-kay,umi don't really write constructive criticism,i think they are all good thats for reading one of my poems later.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Great poem. I don't see where you need improvement. But if I do, doubt it, I will let you know. Promise.

    Ashley Morris

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