Darkk night

by paths of peace   Jul 26, 2008


Nightmares haunting my dreams
tears of blood, making them extreme
crying out for your love
but the only person who can hear me is from up above.
summer turning into winter,
in my heart, you reenter.
finding my way out, trapped door, but i cant, because its you i cant live without.
screaming for your attention,
dark nights, you wont listen, but its you I'm trying to mention.
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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "cant" should be "can't".

    "wont" should be "won't".

    and "i" should be "I".

    This was really good and gave off some of your true thoughts, I wish I could have read more, you have intrigued me with your words.

    God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Rhinehalt

    Have you lived through a lot for someone of your age? Hm, your poems remind me of my sister. Painful and beautiful work again.

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Perdy deep fer someone so young but it rings loud with the truth. keep it up, Ill be reading somemore .

  • 15 years ago

    by bleedingximperfection

    This was good, I loved it.
    :]
    5/5

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