Why cant we?

I like this poem, I can really relate! I like the repition and the flow, the word choice could improve a little, but otherwise i think it's really great. I really really like the 3rd stanza, if you add a coma after Heartbreaking or took "this" out from after Heartbreaking, it would be perfect. Wonderful job! 5/5

I wouldn't change a thing other than any spelling or grammar, if it's how you feel that's all that's important. The poem speaks to me as the same question I and millions of others throughout time have asked. Someone is always left asking why in these type of breakups.

Yeah thanks im going to change now.. i know that topic is very common but i just wrote based on my experience and what i have been through this time, once again thanks i really appreciate alot..

I think most people already pointed out the few mistakes that I saw so I don't need to bring those up again. I thought the poem was written well with the exception of those couple spelling mistakes which can easily be fixed. I can relate to the love and emotion in the poem and I ask myself the same questions sometimes...Excellent job 5/5 GG23

If we misses each other,

^Misses should be miss

Okay, well first of all you repeated
yourself way too many times.. That
really kinda ruins the poem. The flow
was shaky and had problems getting
the worlds out at times becuase it didn't
match. Quite a bit of mistakes this poem
could really use some work. And usually
if you were going to write a clice there could
have been some originality. but keep up
the good work i am familiar with your
work and i know you could do better because
I happen to be a fan of your work. Well
try again. Sorry i don't mean to be mean but
just trying to help you out that's all don't take
it personally.
<3tay
4/5