Dirty heart
by TITA Sep 11, 2008
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I gave u my heart willing with my hands clean and now that u want to give it back to me it is a brusd |
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16 years ago
"I gave u my heart willing with my hands clean and now that u want to give it back to me it is a brusd"
"u" should be spelled out "you".
What's that last word "brusd"? I don't know what you meant, try using spell check.
Add comma's and period's to this piece for pauses and it will be a lot better. Because without them I couldn't understand what you were saying part of the time.
