Is it you?

by Maddy   Sep 15, 2008


I love you more
than words can say,
you say you feel
the exact same way.
But I still sit and think
everyday,
is this real?
Is this true?
That one special person,
is it you?

Are you the one
I've been waiting for?
Surely you can't be
all that and more.

We're so different,
yet still so the same,
are you sure this
isn't just all a big game?

It seems so impossible
to be happening,
especially to someone
as unworthy
as me.

Can I really find
that other half of me
at such a young age;
only 13?!

Can I really find
love this true?
I just need to know,
is it you?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow.. what a great poem. You asked questions that everybody asks themselves sometime in their life, regardless of their age. How do we know that we are ever good enough? Well we dont.. we just have to go with it.

    We're so different,
    yet still so the same,
    are you sure this
    isn't just all a big game?

    ^^ My favourite stanza. especially the first two lines, very good.

    Keep up the great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nanita

    Amazing.. iloveit =)

    [chris&caro]

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Maddy you've written a very nice poem about something thats as old as time itself, and you've asked the questions well.Your poem was well written and fresh i liked it very much but if i may suggest just one thing

    It seems so impossible
    to be happening,
    especially to someone
    as unworthy
    as me.

    look at the last two lines i think the english is more acceptable that way but the choice is your's . Well done

    Grant

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