Whisper Me

by ADEL   Sep 29, 2008


Whisper me the roses
blooms in the flown spring
drip of my glossy dew
the next feather of the wings
and whisper me the buds
jewels in the blossomy rings

Sigh me the seas
pearls in the wide shells
waves of my colored breeze
the next song of the bells
and sigh me the mermaids
grace in the drowned chills

Dive me the oceans
depth of the whale's flow
burst of my silky dolphins
the next dip of the rainbow
and dive me the emotions
suns in the wavy glow

Sag me the earth
split in the red sky
fall of my rainy mirth
the next tear of my eye
and sag me the shaky birth
drop in the shady sigh

Bleed me the rivers
bliss in the wounded stream
sunlit water in the wells
the next echo of my dreams
and bleed me the stars
gust in the moonlit beams

Spear me the kiss
heat on my thirsty lips
autumn in the secret hiss
and spear me the rain
in the essence of my pain

( C ) Copyright 2008 ADEL ATTIYEH

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Deep and meaningful. You are a master of the metaphors, that's for sure. A clever arrangement, catchy rhythm and flow and the rhyming isn't forced. I truely admire the fact that you use the English language so beautifully and it isn't your first language. You continue to paint pictures with your vivid imagery. Excellent job!

  • 15 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write. words were beautifully arranged. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by M00TM00T

    OO WOW ! DAMN THIS IS A GOOD POEM!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kenny

    This poem really hooked my up, with the twist of it's rhymes and the meaning, it's one of the best I'd ever read. ^^,

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This piece is worded so wisely. and it's very meaningful. so beautifully written with a fantastic flow indeed. i was mesmerized.

    Bleed me the rivers
    bliss in the wounded stream
    sunlit water in the wells
    the next echo of my dreams
    and bleed me the stars
    gust in the moonlit beams

    that stanza was lovely, i liked it the most out of all of them. the words you speak of are so pure and deep. especially beautiful. a great write, keep writing! job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

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