Leave Me

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Oct 3, 2008


Leave me in the pouring rain,
So you won't see my tears fall.
Leave me in my darkest days,
Like you don't love me at all.

Leave me when the thunder rolls,
And the neon lightning strikes.
So you won't hear my heart shatter,
And when I call your name that night.

Leave me in the hurricane's flood,
So in my tears I'll slowly drown.
Leave me when I'm all alone,
Just let me fall to the muddy ground.

Leave me standing underneath,
The cloudy night time sky.
Because no stars will sprakle,
When you tell me goodbye.

Leave me with my heart beat,
Fading in my bleeding chest.
Leave me like I know you will,
Because you think it's best.

And I'm left with the memories,
That I will forever see.
Playing over the days of us,
As you leave me.

-Copyright-Amber Palmer

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  • 17 years ago

    by CalebxXxPoet With A PurposexXx

    Exclellent guy!!! jk lol anyway ILY UR BFF CAleb

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "Leave me when the thunder rolls,
    And the neon lightning strikes.
    So you won't hear my heart shatter,
    And when I call your name that night."
    - My favorite stanza, by far. I love your usage of neon - it gave me such lovely imagery in my head.
    But in the last line I don't think that the 'And' is necessary.

    The ending tied up the poem nicely and your word usage was good. The flow was smooth, there weren't any rough spots. And overall, you did a fantastic job. Keep writing. 5/5

    Take care,
    Stephanie

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