Depression Prone

by Beautiful Forever   Oct 24, 2008


[Hello, you're back again I see]

I'm lost - where should I go?
Where is the path I've taken?
Your lies are all I know,
Won't you prove I'm mistaken?

[You're so weak, it's pathetic]

Stay with me please - don't go,
I need to be broken once more,
Just force my feelings to show,
This is the only way to be sure,

[Lying to yourself is naive]

I'm not believing - my own lie,
I'm torn apart, broken and alone,
Falling into denial of you and I,
Wishing I wasn't depression-prone,

[I can not save you]

I refuse to accept - this is a lie,
You're only blinding me from hope,
You'll see the truth when I die,
Just help me tie this rope...

[Save yourself...]

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    You're right, I do like this one really =]
    I loved the type this poem was written with. I find it creative

    Stay with me please - don't go,
    I need to be broken once more,
    Just force my feelings to show,
    This is the only way to be sure,

    I loved this stanza A LOT, especially the second line, needing to be broken is like....Idk it's just a new expression that I like :)

    I refuse to accept - this is a lie,
    You're only blinding me from hope,
    You'll see the truth when I die,
    Just help me tie this rope...

    I like this one too, I think this was the perfect ending to the piece, after all this conversation it was clear that a move like this will be done !

    The poem was great Sean =] I like it and I loved the sentences between the []

    Write on
    xx

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