Winter (Etheree)

by Ingrid   Nov 17, 2008


Winter (Etheree)

Frost
nibbling
at my nose
Cold winter 's day
An azure blue sky
Wind blowing from the east
Virgin snow under my feet
Wise animals hibernating
Church bells and smells of roasted chestnuts
fill the air, along with thoughts of Christmas

An Etheree starts with a one syllable-line and with each line a syllable is added until there are ten.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    You painted a nice picture of winter, very warm, good job, an enjoyable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful imagery.. :) i could feel the winter chills :)

    "An azure blue sky
    Wind blowing from the east
    Virgin snow under my feet"

    ^^ the beauty of winter is so beautifully picturised...

    keep writing..

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    this is such a perfect scene set in this wonderful form that we call Etheree..now cover it in Marzipan and decorate it for christmas, ready to slice into and serve to loved ones in front of a warming log fire.

    Well done my friend.

    Michael
    ((hugs))

  • 17 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Nice image and word flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. The wording was great. The flow was good through out the poem, it put a nice picture into my mind. I see nothing that needs to be fixed or looked at. I gave it a 5/5.

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