A song of longing ( Crown oddguain )

Nice, clever write Ingrid, in your usual highly descriptive and clever style. Well written.

Amazing poem again. Never seen this form. It's cool.
My fav stanza was
Heart
beating fast
This time, will it last?
Dare I believe your words so
strong?

It was very grabbing and I loved it.

Ingrid,

a new form, well to me anyway. I like this form, the way it looks on a page. The poem speaks of previous trust and it's failure. New trust will always bring those memories flooding back, but hopefully with lessons learnt, trust will only be given to those relationships that have proven longevity, as trust takes time to aquire and of there are varying different levels of trust, each one revealing a deeper bond between two. Expectations come into this equation too, sometimes keeping a level perspective on a relationship can prevent a wrong conclusion being made.

As I mention, I like this form, your skill and knowledge is amazing.

((hugs))

Michael

I liked this poem. It was different. The flow was smooth through out the poem. The wording was great. I also really liked the format that you used. I gave this poem a 5/5.

You as always ingrid put all your feelings and expressed a very good way

no one after soo much hurt wil be soo much into trusting and will wonder eacht tiem if thsi is true

hpoping that otehr one will see it and know
!!!

great poem !!