Addictive embraces

That's really good Kevin. The flow was great. I really liked it. Liked the topic. Addictive embraces is an excellent.....erm.....METAPHOR...lol thats it.
5/5

This is a truely beautiful poem. I hope you showed the person it was dedicated to, because its gorgeous.

Every time I kiss you
I feel my heart start to race
I feel a high that no drug
Can hope to replace

^^ aww how cute. i love the originality of the, last two lines in this stanza. beautiful.

You bring out the best in me
You are gods greatest creation
His greatest masterpiece, my angel
You are my inspiration

^^ how amazing, "your angel." thats so sweet. Every girl wants to be a guys inspiration. i really hoped you showed this to her.

When I feel your touch
Temptation whispers inside my mind
Every time you smile I thank god
That he was so kind

^^ possibly my favourite stanza, flawless i think. this poem speaks of true love and this stanza really proves that.

Because he blessed me with
The angel of grace
You're like a drug to me
I'm addicted to your embrace

^^ your last line, is amazing. Addicted to your embrace... wow. i love that.

awesome job.
5/5

A very sweet love poem. Your expression of love was wonderful and I know you melted her heart. Good luck to you^_^ Keep writing it's beautiful