Clouds ( Huitain)

by Ingrid   Dec 7, 2008


Lying on my back in the sun
Warm breeze blowing, grass smells so sweet
Watching the clouds is always fun
Shapes and faces, silly but neat
A great pass time during the heat
My mind taking me everywhere
I have all I will ever need
From this abundance I will share

HUITAIN

A Huitain has 8 lines.
Each line has 8 syllables only.
Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme
Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme
Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a lovely poem Ingrid, your words reminding us all that all we need for total happiness can be found all around us, if only so many souls the world over, would understand this.
    Your words hopefully will be heeded by those who strive instead for a greedy and unhappy, unkind world.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tony

    It was so nice to read this on a chilly English winter afternoon, took me back to a sunny afternoon in August. Delightful.

  • 15 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5. I feel everyone can relate to this beautiful piece of poetry.Our imagination goes wild while watching the clouds.Great work.Keep it up.God bless.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I agree with Kelleyana...this poem juz makes you want to relax and and be at a state of a peaceful mind...wonderful picture that you have depicted with your words

    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Waw you creates a relaxing atmosphere in my mind. One that takes me back in warm spring. I enjoy my read, keep it up, kel.

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