Foreign Confession (HUITAIN)

by Faithless   Dec 9, 2008


How I wish i could understand
foreign words that you are saying
blood stream from a different land
but still we are the same beings
wounds and bruises still need healing
distance won't stop these affections
So tell me what are your feelings?
Are those words your true confessions?

HUITAIN

A Huitain has 8 lines.
Each line has 8 syllables only.
Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme
Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme
Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme

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  • 17 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was very beautiful and full of emotion. Every word has alot of meaning... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was very touching and wonderful. I loved the emotion in it. You've done a great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Azzza,

    I like this a lot.
    A few remarks: beings ( add an s); still need healing ( loose the s) and these affections instead of this.
    You are doing well, really well:)

    Hugs, my friend

    5/5 Ingrid

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