Sweet Lotus Flower

by Ingrid   Dec 15, 2008


Sweet Lotus flower,
blossoming in the garden of delight
Many times he came to visit her,
enchanted by her captivating beauty
One day a cold wind took her by surprise
The young man returned, scissors in his hand
Alas, too late he came---
now on his table an empty vase forever stands

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A Love that came too late. Sad.
    Always your poems contain a message Ingrid, which is why they are so delightful and interesting to read. You are a wise woman!
    Nicely penned in your usual style Ingrid.

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That was so sweet. Although it was short it was full of meaning and very beautiful write.
    I love the metaphor of the lotus flower. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Very simple and short but still great! :P

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww tts was a sad poem indeed.The choice of words that you used truly conveys the emotions that you want to bring out in the poem

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Message is clear, sometimes we wait to long and the love or person we desire is no longer there. Good job. 5/5

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