An Intensity

by Bugg   Dec 20, 2008


Your eyes don't lie
And they're staring into mine
With an intensity that burns the soul.

You electrify every nerve,
Send chills down my spine
Making me lose self-control.

Your voice floats over me,
Washing me in your warmth
Oh, it's about to take it's toll.

Those hands of yours,
They move with such grace
Through the air, they flow.

You make my knees go weak
You send my heart into a frenzy,
And you don't even know.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good one... In a way it's a simple write. Nice work!

  • 10 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Your story is interesting as is the rhyme scheme. My read was not as smooth as it should be as your metre/rhythm is not there.

  • 10 years ago

    by Empathy

    I absolutely loved reading this poem because some of stanzas I found I could relate to. It reminds of the situation I am in with love right now. Though it is confusing beyond belief for me, this poem makes me feel like I am not so alone in my predicament, but I digress.

    This is very well thought out and written. I really enjoyed the descriptions you used to describe the different feelings of actions. Overall a great read, and a much better type of love poem that I have read in a while.

    Excellent work.

  • 10 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awww... this was beauitfully writen. i can relate to this. ur heart pounding with life cuz he's nxt you and ur breath goes away with that smile but he doesnt even know he does that to you. sading but also happy. ya.. i really do love it. Great job. Keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 10 years ago

    by Katie

    Kail this is so great! Would it happen to be about a guy whose starts with a J?