I absolutely loved reading this poem because some of stanzas I found I could relate to. It reminds of the situation I am in with love right now. Though it is confusing beyond belief for me, this poem makes me feel like I am not so alone in my predicament, but I digress.
This is very well thought out and written. I really enjoyed the descriptions you used to describe the different feelings of actions. Overall a great read, and a much better type of love poem that I have read in a while.
Awww... this was beauitfully writen. i can relate to this. ur heart pounding with life cuz he's nxt you and ur breath goes away with that smile but he doesnt even know he does that to you. sading but also happy. ya.. i really do love it. Great job. Keep it up!