I'm confused by this poem, but i feel sad reading it. it's really good though, don't get me wrong. i liked it! "He was your one and only, Said he was feeling lonely. Looked into your secret life, Introduced you to that knife."
i understand it until you get to the part about him introducing the knife. who is he? maybe explain the connection a little more that you have to this person so it could clear up confusing things to read. but great stuff! :)