Beauty In The Breakdown

by isabel   Dec 20, 2008


Attracted by a wounded abyss of tears
I let my soul bleed for a thousand years
My body was tied up and left in the ground
"My love, there's always beauty in the breakdown"

A heartless apathy... No energy to run...
I try to raise my head and look into the sun
A stream of light... The intensity of a flame...
Echoes of sadness... Nightingales, they became...

The twisted sorrow breaks into space
While my life is awakened by your face
Without a balance, the world would drown
"My love, there's always beauty in the breakdown"

I fell into the night... My sweet angel caught me...
Your laugh is my lullaby... Only you I long to see...
You whisper... I feel lost in the beauty of your heart
"My love... I will never let you fall apart..."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Amazing. I absolutely LOVE this. It's so... wonderful. 5/5, this is going in my favorites.

  • 16 years ago

    by Obscura

    Wow i love this poem it is truly amazing the rythem is so smooth and flowing you could dance to it the emotion was intense the structure is very well laid out within the poem i loved the ending it was a perfect way to finish it

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    Nice i liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer

    AMAZING!!! You are very creative with your words! "My love, there's always beauty in the breakdown." Its a very beautiful poem! Very catchy title! 5/5! Keep up the good work! *jennifer*

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Wow, this is so pretty.
    "I try to raise my head and look into the sun.
    A stream of light...The intensity of a flame.
    That part is so beautiful to me. This poem is very well-worded and overall very great. Keep it up!

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