Deep in the Heart of Misery

Beautifully felt!!
5/5

A reoccurring thought,
One blade, my flesh,
Other wounds still fresh,
No more misery to be fought,

^^ I thought that stanza was incredibly powerful and intense. The entire poem is full of deep emotions, and im sorry if you feel this way. It wasnt forced, but i think the flow was a bit off in some places. But thats just my opinion, maybe its just the way im reading it. But anyway, apart from that youve done an excellent job. Well done.

"Hide the scars,
Tell a lie,
Don't look at their eye,
Just look at the stars."
^^absolutely beautiful lines ! honestly that was breathtaking to read

i think so many people will be able to relate to this message i mean everyone battles with this at one point does someone really care? or is everyone just there? the flow was flawless and each words was perfect

5/5

A reoccurring thought,
One blade, my flesh,
Other wounds still fresh,
No more misery to be fought,

^^ we need to talk.

I loved this alot it was wonderfully written!!!
5/5