Fly so hard i'll fall

In the opening stanza, you accidentally confused the verb. "I will fly so hard I fall" The "I WILL" is future tense, but the I FALL is present tense. Maybe try SO HARD I WILL FALL". The next two lines seem to contradict each other too. Line two left me with an image that you fell, but now your dancing on the stars above. I like the imagery you are going for, but it was a little confusing reading it the first time.

The next two stanzas are good.

I loved the line "I'll always have your name but i never had your heart".

Good closing line as well.

Overall, another pretty good peom. I thought it lacked power words though. It seemed like I was just reading a story, nothing really grabbed my attention and made me say WOW!. I would also suggest removing some of the instances of "I'll".

Again, I would probably add some punctuation and fix the lowercase letters, but the subject and wording was pretty good.

...wow. that's so well written. so much passion and emotions.

well done :D

Sad, and touching. keep writing, i enjoyed it.