Bureaucrats Portraits

I love the use of one word. That's so much powerful than using sentences. This way every word has it's own meaning. Very clever idea. I enjoyed this one. Keep it up. Nik

You are just amazing with structured poems!! i couldn't do that with out making the words i used suck!! i like the words you choose : ) they were powerful
simple poem but great meaning to it 5/5 : ) : ) : )

Hmm, I've not yet seen this form of poetry, so I'm a little surprised! I loved all the words you used. I'm doing a poster on sexism in politics tomorrow, not that your poetry could fully relate, but bureaucrat in your title reminded me of that. :)

Bri~

Whoa this is very nice. I didnt notice it was like the alphabet til i showed my friend and she said something

Iv'e seen this contest aswell and to be honest this piece is one of the best, your chioce of wording outshines most of the others =] Great job