Never ending pain

I can relate the this poem very well.

Makes me wish I had more time to focus on the things that's important to me, very enjoyable. You're work is a craft!

Bu the way you have not stated what form of poetry you made. . please specify if that doesn't bother. . I think that's *DIMINISHED HEXAREVERSE* i think I have done this kind of poem.

"Fears
Who cares?
Body trembles
slaughtering war
Innocent pays the price
Corpse lying without lives
Unpleasant sounds vibrates the ground
So called brave men feeling no sense of guilt
Will war resolve underlying issue?"
-you have painted the images so vividly, it's like I can see them in front of me. the imagery is powerful and yet you have done it well though you have been unconscious on the form

"Only the will power of negotiation
There might be some hopes for cessation
Rivers of blood without regrets
Christian, Jew and muslim, peace
Expand it to Palestine
No derive from life
Stop destruction
Call for peace
become
One"
-you have really extracted a really good perspective here, specifically in the current situation of our land, our lives where peace abandoned our hearts, we can only be one I think if an alien invasion will be declared where all nations would come hand in hand together.

*interesting Write*

=5/5=

Good work but just so you know one of the 6 is missing

It all comes together like the word should
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