Change (Huitain)

by Sylvia   Jan 15, 2009


Metamorphosis, renewal, change.
Dreams begin again, we rebound.
Feelings of hope are within range,
making amends to friends profound.
God's many blessings will surround,
for these things we should pray today.
Let our combined voices resound,
that we will not be lead astray.

Copyright © 2009 Sylvia All Rights Reserved
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A Huitain has 8 lines. Each line has 8 syllables only. Lines 1 and 3 should rhyme. Lines 2,4,5 and 7 should rhyme. Lines 6 and 8 should rhyme.

The Huitain is an old form from France, with several variations developing over time. It is a wonderfully flexible form which can be as short as the required eight lines, or can continue in eight line sets for as long as you wish. This is another great form for collaboration, with each poet developing their own eight line sequence.

The Huitain went by a syllable count of eight originally, but with the fondness for English iambic pentameter, has also been seen with 10 syllables. The variations are all variations on the rhyme scheme, however, there is one type of pattern all variations follow. There must be one set of four rhyming words, and two sets of two rhyming words.

French/English #1: a, b, a, b, b, c, b, c
French/English #2: a, b, b, a, a, c, a, c
Spanish #1: a, b, a, b, a, c, a, c
Spanish #2: a, b, b, a, a, c, c, a
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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Change is very important if we want to progress through life, especially if we have been led astray and want to get back on the right path.
    I loved it, really interesting form which you wrote to very well :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes change is good and sometimes we hope
    it is for the best. Liked the form as well as
    the message you conveyed.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A much beautiful poem, dear Silvia.

    It has a deeper meaning for me personally, since I have made amends with someone very dear to me.
    To be lead astray is something awful, but God watches us always and I have a feeling that He has His ways of showing us what is true or false in the end.

    Never stop writing:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid