by Blah Blah Blahhhh Feb 8, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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The taste of the rusty bitter blood, |
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I could feel the hatred and anger ringing loud and clear throughout this piece, good job with that, it came alive for the reader. Your "i"s should be capitalized and "cant" should be "can't". |
by Lady Nik
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Great work hun. keep up the amazing work. Shanik |