Chocolate lovers

by kelleyana   Feb 20, 2009


Comes in different shape and size,
From dark to brown also creamy white,
Or a cascade fountain of pure delight, all
Enticed, my appetite crave to take a bite
A flowing, tempted river of sweet delight

Gazing on three heavenly cascading tiers
Sweet aroma of melted chocolate filled the air
Like an eternity of passion that lured me into temptation
A love that goes beyond all sweetness that evokes satisfaction and contentment
Sharing an intimate form of communication with my sense of taste, where
Eating became a pleasurable and sensuous activity, and there is no feeling of guilt
Dipped unlimited assortment treat into a waterfall of decadence, gourmet
Savored the delicacies, fondue creamy mouthwatering sensation

A booster of mood lifting agent that stimulates my nervous system
Giving feelings of contentment and joy
A sentiment that chocolate is a unique food, one of the best that brings out the pleasure
By its texture and odor that appeal to my senses.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Write!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Kel, you juz make me crave for chocolates right now...You just make it sound so delicious and tempting.I like that you just let the words flow out to the comfort of the readers tongue.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Shinobi

    You expressed the sensation of choclate in a very detailed way. I find it a little hard to call this piece a poem. The first stanza had short lines and a few rhymings here and there, but the other stanzas had long lines with a little poetic context.
    I liked the details and the words you chose to describe the choclate love, but try to shorter the lines a bit and make it more poetic.

    Overall 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is one of the few poems I have read to stimulate the taste buds
    Very well written

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    MMM CHOCOLATE!!! Great Write, Much Enjoyed!!!

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