Love's Rebirth

It's a tad too confusing for me
I loved the Idea as well as the length, but your wording was slightly confusing. That for me through the whole thing off and I couldn't concentrate on the message. Other than that, it was a great poem.

~thank you for the poem

I don't have a whole lot to say, seeing as a majority of the people whom have commented has mentioned a majority of the stuff I was going to mention. So, I noticed you use capitalization in the begining of ever line. It isn't needed, you only need to capitalize if you are starting a sentence or you are emphasising a word.

Overall I really liked the poem, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

This poem is a LOT better than the last one I read of yours. I havnt read any of your other poems (maybe I should) so maybe the last poem was just a one time flaw, but this one is great. "hearts" in the first line should be "heart's" but besides that its great. The only potential for improvment would be a LITTLE more imagery. Some of the sentences have only 1-2 adjective or passionate words. pump them up and well... its already awesome.

I liked it, i liked the intensity, and how much emotion there is. Its clear youve poured your heart into it. But like the above comments, i found that the rhyme scheme was a little too forced. But i really liked it apart from that. Nice work.

Not bad it has some good imagery and such. My only criticism is that some of the rhmyes seem too forced. i give i a 4/5 tho. keep it up.