I was...

by Happy With A New Start   May 5, 2009


I love you
do you love me?
well do you

i was emo
so long ago
i have this scars

so deep and full
memories of pain
teaching me if i didn't

if i didn't cut they wouldn't be here
to remind me of that day
that day that you left me to die

crying and screaming
bleeding and dying
you walked away smiling

i don't think you love me*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    You commented on one of my poems, so i thought it'd only be fair if i checked out your work.

    this reminds me of one of my exs, i like it

  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This was a fantastic write. The words you pieced together folded out into a masterpiece. Though my recommendation is definitely yo fix up you're grammer and capitalization. Not to say I will rate this lower because of that, though I definitely found it much to my distaste.

    Also, I was a bit upset with the clear label you plastered upon yourself the stereotypical name of 'emo'. Since, I felt for your poem and could easily relate, as well as fall under said stereotypical category, I did NOT like the use of it. But that's just my opinion ^^;; A great write overall. 5/5

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