Lingering Glance

by kelleyana   May 14, 2009


Silent moments together, Creates passionate desire
Feeling the closeness of nature that bloomed on face of the one we admire,
Creating a warmth that ignites into a burning fire
Feelings that takes us to the seven heaven or even higher

Gazing in nature marvel as our eyes met each other
So profound that we immediately drowned into each other's gaze
Holding each other there, and no use for words to say, as we exchange a visible frisson in lingering glance

Bodies so close while we shared a romantic dance, a sensation Like a hypnotic trance
Our heart takes over and emotions conquered the rest
Searching for comfort, I rest my head upon his chest
Feeling the pounding of his heart that beats only love for me.

Accepting the gift of love that overflows the hearts
Awaken flame which makes no other pleasure feels the same
A complete satisfaction of wholeness
That goes beyond physical attraction to a deeper commitment.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Oh, the Power of A Glance, The Magic Held in Eyes, Such Passion, Promise, Held in Simply Glances. Wonderful Write, Enjoyed Kel!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This poem was one that i've seen many many times. You did something different with your opening statement though, you went A, A, A, A. Which is refreshing.

    I like the poem but felt that there was too much polyslavic mutlible polyslavic words in there at times, i felt it was almost force.

    That being said. I enjoyed the poem and felt that you did a good job, but the style was both good and bad, it threw me off but also took away from the poem at points as well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This beautiful imagery takes me to my seventh heaven as I am what is known as a hopeless romantic and this poem flowed right into my heart

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kelleyana
    What a lovely poem of love.

    Bodies so close while we shared a romantic dance, a sensation Like a hypnotic trance
    Our heart takes over and emotions conquered the rest
    Searching for comfort, I rest my head upon his chest
    Feeling the pounding of his heart that beats only love for me.

    When we find out true love we know it right away. There is no need for words between the two. A touch a glance says it all.
    Great job!
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A beautiful love poem by you. Lingering glances, you know when you see the one you are meant to love with that glance.

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