by She Is My Rain May 19, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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When I look at you |
by Nobodys Hero
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I think the structure of the poem suited the piece perfectly, the flow worked very well and you incorperated your emotion into each stanza very beautifuly. Great job overall i enjoyed reading it =] |
by Lady Nik
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This was amazing. Everything flowed well. I love the way you write. You style is very simple but also powerful I love the emotions you used. Very nice. Shanik |
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Wow wow wow; love it.. |
by deathraven
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I liked it i understood everything.. |