Devil's Reject (Song)

by Lady Nik   May 27, 2009


I'm waiting for what, I don't know.
I'm breathing cause my lungs won't let me go.
I've been here for months now
I want to get out but I don't know how.

I found a tunnel and tried to get my way down.
Once I did the devil kicked me out.
He said no time no love for you
No time no love for you.

I'm still waiting by this tree
You said you'd come back to get me
But it's been months now. Where are you?
I'm suffocating turning blue.

I found a tunnel and tried to get my way down.
Once I did the devil kicked me out.
He said no time no love for you
No time no love for you.

I have a problem, with no remedy.
I don't know friendship, I only have enemies.
I'm alone and I don't know why.
I'm angry and about to cry.

I found a tunnel and tried to get my way down.
Once I did the devil kicked me out.
He said no time no love for you
No time no love for you.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very lyrical and i feel the emotion quite well

  • 14 years ago

    by Exostosis

    "I'm waiting for what, I don't know.
    I'm breathing cause my lungs won't let me go."

    The start itself blew me off. Very well composed. . the flow was perfect. . .felt good reading it...

    talent shows...^^,

  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    Your repitition of 'No time no love for you.' was powerful, not overused and repeated in a fashion that it was effective and added to your poetry. This would absolutely be a beautiful song. You have great flow and a great way with words. Another great piece. 5/5 A very blessed poet.

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is written in a really interesting way. Is the devil supposed to be someone close to tht hurut u? Thts the type of vibe i go frorm tht. i love this poem as well keep up the good work

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is written in a really interesting way. Is the devil supposed to be someone close to tht hurut u? Thts the type of vibe i go frorm tht. i love this poem as well keep up the good work

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