Dewdrop (Haiku)

by Jad   Jun 3, 2009


Dew comes off the blades,
Glistening in the sunrise,
From the misty Morn.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The first line I felt to be a little weak, just the wording I think could be a bit stronger. Second line was good, the exact descriptions of dewdrops. Third line, I would have to agree with the above comment.

    4/5 from me, it was still a very vivid picture.

    Take care and God Bless

    ~MaryAnne

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