Help Me Through The Night

by Melpomene   Jun 3, 2009


I was;
awake when the sun
ceased the sky.
and we slept,
-silently-
beneath
catastrophe.

Please don't rise.

You were,
much too pretty
to lurk in shadows.
Moonshine delineated
half of his face.
-Byzantium-

Awake,
were you
when moons frayed
from sky.
Darkness was deliverance
so you sung to me
that night..

as stars exploded.

Unilluminated
I held your hand,
and somehow..
you held mine.

You helped me
through the night.

For an RTVW Challenge. Another love piece although it also has a touch of darkness to it so I have placed it here.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Awake,
    were you
    when moons frayed
    from sky.
    Darkness was deliverance
    so you sung to me
    that night..

    as stars exploded.
    ^^^
    Loved this part Mel !

    Your word usage was very eye catching and I learned a new word ... wooooot ....

    Wonderfully penned and l loved the read.
    - brilliant -

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    I love how you always include the moon, the night, the sky and the stars in your poems :)
    Though the ending didn't say much to me..I loved your descriptions and the metaphors.

    Well done Meli :]
    Write on~

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