Departing The Remastered (Septolet)

by Italian Stallion   Jun 4, 2009


Elasticity
growing profusely,
defining relativity
while departing humanity.

Scientifically
unproven theories
remastered; revolved around.

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

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The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Usually I find small poems aren't as powerful, but by the time I got to the last line I really loved it. I have this thing about science and I liked how you added that in. It was great.

    Five.

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great job on this form. I like your word choice. Thought provoking!

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very interesting Septolet here

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Indeed you created a picture with your good word choice and the subject of which you talked about. This was another great poem that was masterfully made and is a great work of art or poetry. Good job.

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