Number Nine

by Beautiful Disaster   Jun 18, 2009


I can see you but you can't see me,
The demon inside is raging to be free.
I'm just waiting till you let your guard down,
Everyone knows my talents are renown.

You don't even know the danger you're facing,
When you realize, your heart will start racing.
It's only a matter of time before I make you mine,
You'll be my lucky number nine.

When I'm ready I'll slide from behind you,
This exciting feeling never felt so new.
I'll embrace the sound of your screams,
Your clothes will soon rip at the seams.

I'm going to tear you apart,
This is the best part.
Your eyes stay wide,
Your body will remain where you lied.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Amreen

    Wonderful write.....
    I agree with kim...the poem has good word usage....5/5 from me..:]

  • 15 years ago

    by Kim

    It is a great poem!
    Again, I like your choice of words and the flow of this one was just perfect.
    You really captured the feeling, which gave me goosebumps.
    I am not likely to read this poem again, but trust me... that's a good thing. ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The poem left me more excited than terrified. Very lyrical and well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Really well put together and metered poem which kept me guessing what it was about until the last stanza, dark and scary ha! ha! I know one thing for sure if there is somebody out there you are pursuing don't let him read this ha! ha! Unless of course you know he is a Masochist Ray S 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    A very dark and thrilling piece.
    I liked the dark diction.
    Although I felt the flow was a bit off, it was still well written; it also matches the mind of the murderer.

    5/5

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