Hide-and-Seek (Loser Dies)

by Steady Stereotype   Jun 24, 2009


It's like your ears are clogged with spit,
And the blood and tears you've caused.
It's like you think you have all the wits,
With the harsh words you have tossed.

I always seem to be in the wrong,
"I misunderstand," you say
I always try to look so strong,
I should stop standing in your way.

All the hypocrites,
Praising words they never said,
Blindly throwing vicious hits,
It's time they cried instead.

Take a knife, end sharpened for the blow
Take a gun, bullets ready row by row.
Ready your hand, let's see who's dumb.
Ready or not hypocrites, Here I come.

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  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    The fact that the lines were repititive, it turns off the flow. Overall it was a good read. Keep it up kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    It's time they cried instead.
    -I think it should be
    It's time they cry instead

    but all in all
    I think its nice
    I can feel the anger!
    rawr!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    I think this poem should be voted number one against many others. mi best friend feels the same way. i have tried to get her help but she says theres no way. every night i pray hoping that mabey just mabey she can feel like a normal person. i understand there is no such thing as a normal person, but for her to feel free from all the depression.....

    ..... I really loved the poem because it made eveyrthing i felt come out and be easy for me to understand as i felt that i was the only one who felt that way. GREAT POEM.... (5/5) Excellent

  • 14 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow thats good..very intense...i like it :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very well written and mournful too. Good use of vocabulary and poetic structures...Love it. Great job 5/5

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